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ПОЖАЛУЙСТА-ПОЖАЛУЙСТА,помогите с эссе по английскому,УМОЛЯЮ ,тема: "Students should be allowed to bring their mobile phones to school" (Студентам следует запретить приносить их мобильные телефоны в школу)
План:
1)Вступление (о проблеме)
2)Свое мнение (2 аргумента)
3)Противоположное мнение с 1-2 аргументами
4)Твоё несогласие с оппонентами + объяснение
5)Заключение
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Я НЕ ПРОШУ ВСЕ СДЕЛАТЬ И ПО ПЛАНУ,НО ХОТЬ ЧТО-НИБУДЬ
УМОЛЯЮ

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Yes
• In the present world kids are not safe anywhere, not even in schools. Allowing the use of cell phones in schools can allow them to contact the family whenever in need.
• There are many apps that are coming in the market to help the students in the learning. The use of such apps is a good way to move towards digital learning.
• Computers are allowed in school and the Smartphones are like the mini computers with internet technology. If computers are use din school then use of Smartphones should be fine.
• Even children can contact the emergency services like police, fire or medical whenever there is a sudden requirement.
• Parents can better keep a track of their children as they have the habit of eloping somewhere else after the school time.
• All the mobile phones can be kept at silent. This feature is good enough to stop them from any kind of distractions.

No
• Mobile phones are not just the screenless bricks of past that were used to call and text. Today it is the world of Smartphone and they can offer far more of a distraction to kids than they used to. It will hamper their ability to learn things.
• The mobile phones will have negative impact on the learning atmosphere. Everyone from teachers to the other students will be affected by the use of cell phones.
• Access to the Smartphones and the internet will open the gateways of cheating and copying for the students.
• It will unnecessarily create an additional expense for the school authorities to make mobile lockers to keep the mobile phones safe during the school time. Still the risk of mobile phone being stolen will exist.
• The students who cannot afford the expensive Smartphones can develop feeling of inferiority. It will create difference between students.
• The excessive use of cell phone at such a tender age can certainly pose threat to the health of the students and can lead to health problems.

Conclusion
Every situation has two sides and ample arguments to support the tow different perceptions. Sometimes there is no easy answer. If you look around you can see that the world is changing and even at a faster pace, and we need to change with it. However, before we do it, it is better to develop a solid plan to make things fall well in place.