написанно без ошибок .....но мне не нравится смысл...очень много местоимения We-мы

I want(здесь я бы написала I would like to tell ...) to tell you about memorable days in my family. The first memorably(memorablE здесь же прилагательное ) day is wedding anniversary of my parents.(я бы написала my parents' wedding anniversary) They married a
long time. (they have married for a long time) On this day our family dines in the restaurant.(без on просто this day) Then we walk around
the town, and our parents talk to(tell us,ни в коем случае ни talk to us) us different interesting stories about them.(themselves)
I with my sisters give a present.(my sister and I usually give them pretty presents, such as family photos, cakes, bouquets or
books)  They always rejoice, when we congratulate them on their holiday.

The second memorablE day in our family is The New Year. Sometimes, our family
invites quests. We celebrate this holiday together. At first, we prepare the
New Year dishes, then watch a film “Ironiya sudby”. At 10 p.m. we gather togerher at the
table and discuss our last progress and future plans. Then I organize interesting contests. . At the midnight we make a wish and rejoice the New
Year.